Tomorrow marks the end of the term and this one in particular just flew by. Other than the facial on the 1 person dialogue, we spent all term doing a 2-person shot. My mentor Greg Kyle suggested I try this piece out and this was what I ended up with:
Oh wow, I almost started to animate this same clip a couple of weeks ago. Thankfully I didn't. I really don't like animating a clip someone else has already animated. You have a nice blog man, I like your work. I think that the awkward pull back isn't working. When he says toner I feel like the emotion isn't as clear as it could be. I would also say that I think you are missing out on a great opportunity to push her character in the last shot. I just feel like the reaction she has now isn't as interesting or as character driven as it could be. Maybe what you are trying to do isn't reading for me. But I think its just a matter of missing a great opportunity to push the character with a different choice. Anyway man, good stuff.
ReplyDeleteCatching this way late but thanks Keith!
ReplyDeleteHey man, thanks for hitting me back. Yeah they ask us to keep our ianimate work pretty low profile so I wont be sharing any of my new stuff for awhile. Interestingly I am in the last class of ianimate so I guess we will both be finishing at roughly the same time. Pretty cool. Anyway man. Hope the shot turns out good. I look forward to seeing the final result.
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